Small fixes and language constructs

1 files changed, 35 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/index.xml b/index.xml
index 69a6b87..107d892 100644
--- a/index.xml
+++ b/index.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 <project>
 <name>hardened</name>
 <longname>Hardened Gentoo</longname>
-<date>2010-10-25</date>
+<date>2010-10-29</date>
 
 <description>
 Hardened Gentoo brings advanced security measures to Gentoo Linux.
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Hardened Gentoo brings advanced security measures to Gentoo Linux.
 <p>
 Hardened Gentoo is a project which oversees the research, implementation, and
 maintenance of security oriented projects for Gentoo Linux. We are a team of
-very competent individuals dedicated to bringing advanced security to Gentoo
+very competent individuals dedicated to bring advanced security to Gentoo
 with a number of subprojects.
 </p>
 
@@ -23,10 +23,10 @@ with a number of subprojects.
 
 <goals>
 <p>
-Hardened Gentoo's purpose is to make Gentoo viable for high security, high
+Hardened Gentoo's purpose is to make Gentoo viable for highly secure, high
 stability production server environments. This project is not a standalone
 project separated from the rest of Gentoo. Instead, it is intended to be a team
-of Gentoo developers which are focused on delivering solutions to Gentoo that
+of Gentoo developers who are focused on delivering solutions to Gentoo that
 provide strong security and stability. These solutions will be available in
 Gentoo once they've been tested for security and stability by the Hardened team.
 </p>
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ or most of the subprojects -->
 -->
 <extraproject name="PaX/Grsecurity" lead="blueness">
 Grsecurity is a complete security solution providing such features as a MAC or
-RBAC system, Chroot restrictions, address space modification protection (via
+RBAC system, chroot restrictions, address space modification protection (via
 PaX), auditing features, randomization features, linking restrictions to prevent
 file race conditions, ipc protections and much more.
 </extraproject>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ layout randomizations and stack smashing protections using ELF shared objects as
 executables.
 </extraproject>
 
-<extraproject name="Hardened-Sources" lead="blueness">
+<extraproject name="Hardened Kernel Sources" lead="blueness">
 A kernel which provides patches for hardened subprojects, and stability/security
 oriented patches. Includes Grsecurity and SELinux.
 </extraproject>
@@ -81,34 +81,47 @@ kerberos, chrooting, tightening services, etc.</plannedproject>
 -->
 
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/primer.xml">
-Introduction to Hardened Gentoo</resource>
+Introduction to Hardened Gentoo
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/hardenedfaq.xml">
-Hardened Frequently Asked Questions</resource>
+Hardened Frequently Asked Questions
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/roadmap.xml">
-Hardened Roadmap</resource>
+Hardened Roadmap
+</resource>
 <!-- This is WIP will apppear when it's done.
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/?.xml">Hardened Debugging
 </resource>-->
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/hardenedxorg.xml">
-Using Xorg with Hardened</resource>
+Using Xorg with Hardened
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/hardened-toolchain.xml">
-Hardened Toolchain Technical Description</resource>
+Hardened Toolchain Technical Description
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/pax-quickstart.xml">
-A quickstart covering PaX and Hardened Gentoo</resource>
+A quickstart covering PaX and Hardened Gentoo
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/pax-utils.xml">
-PaX Utils</resource>
+PaX Utils
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/grsecurity.xml">
-Grsecurity2 QuickStart Guide</resource>
+Grsecurity2 QuickStart Guide
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/capabilities.xml">
-Capabilities Listing</resource>
+Capabilities Listing
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/pic-guide.xml">
-PIC Intro (beginner)</resource>
+PIC Intro (beginner)
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/pic-internals.xml">
-PIC Internals (intermediate)</resource>
+PIC Internals (intermediate)
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/pic-fix-guide.xml">
-PIC Fixing (advanced)</resource>
+PIC Fixing (advanced)
+</resource>
 <resource link="http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/gnu-stack.xml">
-GNU Stack Quickstart</resource>
+GNU Stack Quickstart
+</resource>
 
 <herd name="hardened" />
 
@@ -119,8 +132,8 @@ GNU Stack Quickstart</resource>
 
 <p>
 To participate in the Hardened Gentoo project first join the mailing list at
-<c><mail link="gentoo-hardened@lists.gentoo.org">
-gentoo-hardened@lists.gentoo.org</mail></c>. Then ask if there are plans to
+<mail link="gentoo-hardened@lists.gentoo.org">
+gentoo-hardened@lists.gentoo.org</mail>. Next, ask if there are plans to
 support something that you are interested in, propose a new subproject that you
 are interested in, choose one of the planned subprojects to work on or simply
 ask if you can help with something. You can also talk to the developers and
@@ -134,7 +147,7 @@ the current documents (there are always sections that can be improved or typos
 which we miss) and when you feel brave enough then try writing those documents
 you missed. Usually this only requires some internet research on your side and
 after some documents you'll most probably be able to help with other things you
-though you weren't able before.
+thought you weren't able to help with before.
 </p>
 
 <p>